Apr. 22nd, 2014

thistlechaser: (Book with cat 4)
Lionboy by Zizou Corder.
Rating: 5/loved (1-5/hated-loved)

If I were reviewing only the first third of this book, I'd call it one of the best books I've read in years. The worldbuilding was amazing -- so good that I was in awe of the authors. (Zizou Corderis the pseudonym of mother/daughter British writing team.)

Set in a very near future version of our world, all sorts of alternate sciences (alchemy, voodoo, native magics) work, but the author handled it in a way to make them seem commonplace. One sentence went something like His mother was in the kitchen putting the finishing touches on her last batch of Breathe Easy potions while Charlie was in the living room watching The Simpsons.. Such a fun mix of what should be exotic mixed in with the everyday.

The family was great. The mother was a "scientist" (alchemist), and the father practiced African magics (native magics from Ghana). They joked that between the two of them (science and magic), they could figure anything out. Charlie, their son, could talk to cats. While how that skill came about would make no sense at all in our world, I loved the story in theirs. The father took toddler Charlie on a trip to Africa. The animals of Ghana were familiar with the father and knew he didn't hunt, so mostly just went along with their own business when he was around. A leopard's cub got bit by a poisonous snake and the father had the medicine to cure it, but the cub got startled after and slashed Charlie's arm. Blood from the medicine needle mixed with the slashed arm and because the leopard cub and Charlie exchanged blood at such a young age, Charlie gained the skill to talk to cats.

The world almost had a steampunk feel to it. Gas was mostly gone/banned, so trains and ocean liners were back in style. Only the very rich and powerful could use cars anymore. (Though, like the magic, the lack of gas was very much downplayed -- it was just a fact of life and got a casual mention now and then, it never got a spotlight on it.)

It was only when the plot started that my interest waned. That's not at all to say the plot was bad, but I love worldbuilding and getting to know characters a whole lot more than action.

I was really impressed with how well the authors wrote. The dialogue was so well done! We learned all new things in a natural way, no information dumps. I laughed multiple times in delight at just how well this or that part was written.

The only thing I didn't like about Lionboy is that it's the first book of a trilogy and the authors made no effort at all to give it any kind of a real ending; the end of the book could have easily been a break between chapters or a pause within a chapter. That sort of thing annoys the hell out of me. Want to write a trilogy? GREAT! More for me to read! But it annoys me when an individual book can't stand alone.

I selected Lionboy out of my To Read pile mostly by chance: I was looking for a new one to start and had had a great dream about werelions the night before, so when I spotted Lionboy it seemed a sign that I should read that one. It was a very good book, and I think if I wasn't in a reading slump right now that I'd call it a great one (and have given it a 5 rating). Heck, it really does deserve a 5, I guess I'll change that now.

I really should want to read the next two books in this series, but I really don't feel like reading much of anything. This really was a good book though. It felt a lot like the Chaos Walking series in that it had such a wonderful, realistic, detailed, similar-yet-not world. There was no darkness at all to Lionboy though, even though the plot had serious themes in it. Usually 'no darkness' would be a negative for me, but this story was just so magical and light, like a bedtime story or a generations old fable, I just loved it.

I suppose I will pick up the next two books after all.

Edit: Oh! I'm reviewing it without my ipad, so I didn't get to check my notes while writing this up. I forgot one of my favorite parts! The author would do something that made it clear we weren't in this world, but without adding any confusion. Now and then multiple words would be made into one. Riverboatpolice (police who patrol the river on boats), lionchamber (big room with all the lion cages in it), lionboy (the boy who assists the lion tamer). It was enough to give it an exotic twist without it taking even a moment of thought to figure out what it meant (thus not knocking you out of the story). So perfect! Such a great touch! I fell in love with the authors as soon as I realized this was an ongoing thing in the book. Not overused at all, maybe a dozen combined words in the whole book, but it was just so perfect to give it an exotic, not-our-world air.
thistlechaser: (Book with cat 5)
So close, yet so far. Force over Distance was to be the first ever fanfic included in my 50 book/year challenge. It's more than the length of three books, and the first 50 chapters (about two books' worth) were outstandingly great.

At chapter 51, everything fell apart. Not with an explosion, but with a whisper.

Whispers, murmurs, no one spoke in a normal voice anymore. Men in a physical fight would murmur to each other. A military commander snapping out "Report!" did it in a whisper, and the soldier replied in a murmur. For no reason, murmur and whisper outnumbered 'said' two or three to one.

Conversations were constantly going like this, just a normal conversation, no reason for it to be kept quiet:

“Is that the way it was designed to work?” Young asked it quietly.

“No. Merging outside the interface is what you are supposed to prevent.”

“I guess I’m doing a pretty shitty job,” he said quietly.

“No,” it murmured. “The compulsion to merge is stronger than it should be. Much stronger.”

“Why is that, do you think?” Young whispered.

“Many reasons,” Jackson murmured.

“Like what?” Young asked, careful to keep his voice neutral, unable to believe the level of cooperation he was getting.

“He is partially human, he is physically and cognitively damaged, and he—does not like who he is.” It looked away from Young. “He doesn’t just feel the need to combine with me,” it whispered. “He wants to.”

“Yeah,” Young said, shutting his eyes. “I think you’re right about that.”

“Furthermore,” the AI said, its voice almost inaudible. “I lack a template. I was not designed to operate this way.”


"Words barely audible", "Voice making no sound", "Words too soft to hear". People having a conversation on opposite sides of the room murmured nonstop and no one had a problem hearing it.

I just don't get it. The writing is otherwise good. In 2.7 books' worth of writing, there were a total of THREE typos (two spellcheck wouldn't have caught) and one punctuation issue. That's damned good! Clearly this person had one or more beta reader/editor, why did no one speak up about this murmuring thing?

Chapters 1-50: fine. Then 51 all the murmuring started. I just don't get it.

I made it to chapter 66, though in truth I would have given up long ago if I hadn't wanted to finish and get credit for the review in this year's count. It's 71 chapters long, so you'd think I could finish, but I find that I'm not even reading anymore, my eyes just jump from murmur to murmur to whisper.

Edit: Hm. Searching random chapters, it looks like this was an issue earlier on in the story as well. Maybe 50 was just where I first started noticing it or maybe it got much worse then.

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