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thistlechaserLove's a Bitch and Then He Dies by Harry Potter Wiccan
Christiania was the latest in a long line of Viscardis to attend Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She was a tall, blonde beauty, whose pale blue eyes seemed to pierce one’s very soul. With her vanilla complexion and delicate, regal features, it was easy to mistake her for a Veela. Like all Viscardis before her, she was sorted into Slytherin House.
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That summary is just so many kinds of painful...
I'm skimming it, just to see how bad it really is. The summary is actually the first paragraph. The second:
The Viscardis were an old, respected wizarding family. They claimed pureblood heritage and fabulous wealth. They owned a sprawling estate in Ireland, an apartment in Upper Diagon Alley, and a townhouse in the heart of Paris. Despite her every wish granted and servants to wait on her hand and foot, Christiania was generally down-to-earth and modest.
See for yourself!
Christiania was the latest in a long line of Viscardis to attend Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She was a tall, blonde beauty, whose pale blue eyes seemed to pierce one’s very soul. With her vanilla complexion and delicate, regal features, it was easy to mistake her for a Veela. Like all Viscardis before her, she was sorted into Slytherin House.
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That summary is just so many kinds of painful...
I'm skimming it, just to see how bad it really is. The summary is actually the first paragraph. The second:
The Viscardis were an old, respected wizarding family. They claimed pureblood heritage and fabulous wealth. They owned a sprawling estate in Ireland, an apartment in Upper Diagon Alley, and a townhouse in the heart of Paris. Despite her every wish granted and servants to wait on her hand and foot, Christiania was generally down-to-earth and modest.
See for yourself!
