Pop quiz time!

[thistlechaser]

Quickly, boys and girls, how many things are wrong in this sentence from a fic summary?

A muggle girl's world is changed forever after being bitten by a werewolf on the Hogwart's grounds.

Edited to add:

Gah! Pain! Pain!

Hermione is a newly-sworn attorney about to be disbarred. Harry is an attorney with the qualities of a great leader. Draco is a mafioso with the power and the brains.

Comments

[fyrie.livejournal.com]

*twitches and spasms* Badness. Sheer badness. I thought my summaries were bad, but a muggle girl? On Hogwarts grounds? When a werewolf is loose? Am I smelling Mary Sue on the horizon?

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

You get an A+!

[fyrie.livejournal.com]

Yay! But not on the summary - *kicks it* How stupid can people get? Mind you, fangirly plebs can grow and develop...

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

Yep, they can and hopefully will!

well, i'm not sure, but...

[somniesperus.livejournal.com]

...I think it was the part where the author said Draco had "brains".

Re: well, i'm not sure, but...

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

Heehee!

[kaylarudbek.livejournal.com]

Harry and Hermione as lawyers. A scary summary indeed. But what, pray tell, did Ms. Granger do to get herself disbarred almost as soon as she got admitted?

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

I'm a little curious about that, but not so curious I'm willing to read it and find out!

[kaylarudbek.livejournal.com]

Where was it? FA, ff.net, etc.? I'm willing to attempt to read it, for the sake of seeing Harry and Hermione as lawyers...

(Hmm, plotbunny strikes. Potter and Granger, Solicitors...)

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

Just remember, you asked for it! ;)

The Law by Perfectcircle: Prologue
http://www.thedarkarts.org/authors/perfectcircle/Lpro.html
Rating: PG-13
Hermione is a newly-sworn attorney about to be disbarred. Harry is an attorney with the qualities of a great leader. Draco is a mafioso with the power and the brains. How will these three turn each other's lives into heaven and hell ?

[lemurkat.livejournal.com]

Two paragraphs is enough for me. Hermione already seems out of character.

Kat

[babycakesin.livejournal.com]

*reads* >>A muggle girl's world is changed forever after being bitten by a werewolf on the Hogwart's grounds.>>

*runs away screaming* aaaaaaahhh!! my eyes!! my eyes!!!

[metron-ariston.livejournal.com]

A muggle girl's world is changed forever after being bitten by a werewolf on the Hogwart's grounds.

Ah, Hogwart, the special ed sister school to Hogwarts.


This makes me wonder, if a muggle gets bitten by a werewolf, do they become a wizard by virtue of transforming into a magical creature once every 28.something days?

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

You know, I wondered that, too. The 'muggle bitten by a werewolf' is an interesting idea in and of itself, if only it didn't happen on "Hogwart's" grounds...

[whiterabbitt.livejournal.com]

I'm still much more interested by the prospect of the muggle girl's word being bitten by a werewolf--especially given that the werewolf was on Hogwart's grounds, which most certainly do not intersect with this poor, soon-to-be-masticated muggle world.

Pain.
-Xander