thistlechaser: (Grammar)
More often than I would like, I get annoyed at someone's grammatical mistake, then I question if I'm actually correct or not. A lot of it is second-guessing myself, sometimes it's that language has evolved since I learned a rule, and sometimes I really am wrong. (Happily that third one is the least common, but it's the second one that annoys me most. NO YOU CANNOT HAS A CHEESEBURGER. NO YOU DO NOT KNOW MY "FEELS".)

The use of "latter" comes up now and again. I learned it to mean the second item in a list.

"Beef, pork, or chicken? I'll take the latter, pork."

However, sometimes times I see people using it to mean the last item in the list.

"Beef, pork, or chicken? I'll take the latter, chicken."

Latter does also mean later/last in a time-sense. From Merriam-Webster.com:

Definition of LATTER
1
a : belonging to a subsequent time or period : more recent [the latter stages of growth]
b : of or relating to the end [in their latter days]
c : recent, present [affected by latter calamities]
2
: of, relating to, or being the second of two groups or things or the last of several groups or things referred to [of ham and beef the latter meat is cheaper today]

So in this case, I pretty sure I'm right. Using it to mean "chicken" in the "Beef, pork, or chicken" list is a mistake. It seems an easy mistake to make though, since in non-lists it could mean the last/latest thing.

Any opinions on this? :)
thistlechaser: (Grammar)
Sorry for two posts in one day, but this annoys the heck out of me. I started the year's second book, and it's BAD. I mean bad-bad. Self-published bad. The first paragraph:

"By the gods, pull the damn sword out," the man on the floor howled out into the tavern. Although down the bar, Glorias' ears heard him well enough. The aged warrior looked over at the figure laying face down on the dirty boards. A man screamed in agony while a halo of patrons surrounded him.

So many 'buh?'s in one paragraph! The first sentence is horrible. Remove everything outside of the dialog, add an exclamation mark. That doesn't make it into a good first sentence, but it makes it better. What the hell is up with the second sentence? Why "Although"? Third sentence is okay, other than I'd hyphenate "face-down" (complex adjective). The fourth sentence is the worst. What man? Why "A man"? When paired with the third sentence, it makes it sound like a totally different man is now being talked about!

Plus, on the very first page is a simple grammar error!

While a plump drunkard shambled over to shut the wooden door, Glorias' leaned out from the far end of the bar.

Glorias's what?

Plus their use of possessive on Glorias makes me all frowny. I know there's no ONE TRUE WAY to make a name ending in -s be possessive, but way I learned it (Strunk&White), a ' with no S after for possessive is used only in ancient, biblical names.

Charles's cookie.
Jesus' pie.

The publisher is Seventh Star Press, which I never heard of. Their website is ugly and clunky. I can't find mention of them elsewhere on the net. I'm assuming it's not self, based on this from their site:

Seventh Star Press does not accept or open unsolicited manuscripts. We are currently focusing on our 2009 release schedule and are not adding any new authors/projects at the moment. Please feel free to check back here, as any changes regarding this will be posted here..

Hi typo in their site, too! One or three periods! Pick one! ARG!
thistlechaser: (WoW: Dandelion by Wil)
* This is pretty darned funny:

Go look at your blog/journal. Find the last fandom-related thing you posted. The characters in that post are now your team mates in the Zombie Apocalypse. How fucked are you?

Last thing fandom-ish thing I posted was about Bill Clinton being a brony. Now, I don't watch that My Little Pony show, so I could be really wrong here, but I think I might just be doomed. Though... some of them do magic, right? I wonder if one of them would be strong enough to fly me away? Maybe a couple could carry me on a sling or something?

I'm not counting just mentions of anything that could have a fandom (WoW, movies), only actual fandom-related posts. Huh! Except my mention previous to MLP was actually WoW fandom (fanfic). Varian/Garrosh slash. So... who would be better against zombies, the little cartoon ponies or the leaders of the two WoW factions?

* Amusing typo from some comm on my friendsfriends list:

4) How old are you? Have you had intercourse and/or virginal childbirth?

* TV:
Weeds restarted two weeks ago, and I can't say I'm enjoying this season much. Might just be because I'm watching a half-hour ep once a week instead of watching a whole season in a couple of sittings, but I suspect it's more that they're beating a dead horse.

Dexter season 6 will be starting soon, and I barely touched season 5. After loving previous seasons, I couldn't get into 5 at all. Was it worth watching?

* Michele Bachmann knows 12 things about the world that you don't. Including that Democrats were responsible for swine flu. Almost scarier than her equating gay folks with pedophiles is how she sees her kids ("Her Children's Marriageability" on that link).

* Everyone loves balloons. Except maybe cats.
thistlechaser: (WoW: Dandelion by Wil)
* This is pretty darned funny:

Go look at your blog/journal. Find the last fandom-related thing you posted. The characters in that post are now your team mates in the Zombie Apocalypse. How fucked are you?

Last thing fandom-ish thing I posted was about Bill Clinton being a brony. Now, I don't watch that My Little Pony show, so I could be really wrong here, but I think I might just be doomed. Though... some of them do magic, right? I wonder if one of them would be strong enough to fly me away? Maybe a couple could carry me on a sling or something?

I'm not counting just mentions of anything that could have a fandom (WoW, movies), only actual fandom-related posts. Huh! Except my mention previous to MLP was actually WoW fandom (fanfic). Varian/Garrosh slash. So... who would be better against zombies, the little cartoon ponies or the leaders of the two WoW factions?

* Amusing typo from some comm on my friendsfriends list:

4) How old are you? Have you had intercourse and/or virginal childbirth?

* TV:
Weeds restarted two weeks ago, and I can't say I'm enjoying this season much. Might just be because I'm watching a half-hour ep once a week instead of watching a whole season in a couple of sittings, but I suspect it's more that they're beating a dead horse.

Dexter season 6 will be starting soon, and I barely touched season 5. After loving previous seasons, I couldn't get into 5 at all. Was it worth watching?

* Michele Bachmann knows 12 things about the world that you don't. Including that Democrats were responsible for swine flu. Almost scarier than her equating gay folks with pedophiles is how she sees her kids ("Her Children's Marriageability" on that link).

* Everyone loves balloons. Except maybe cats.

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